Cienie

Just some feedback on a minor UI issue.

So, I was trying to transfer my saves from computer to my phone and ended up only finding the "download sync" button. Then I look into the screen.rpy file and find out that the "upload sync" button only appears in a save screen, which seems kinda unnecessary to me. Like, you could totally just enter the load screen from the main title just to upload your saves. Maybe always showing both buttons could be better?

Though it seems renpy's sync isn't currently functioning anyway(some error occured in the 00sync.rpy file from the renpy folder). Actually I've never used(or even seen) this "sync" function of renpy from my experience of any other FVNs, so maybe this is kinda the reason?

Love to see southeast asian food representation haha (plus Raymond's slang is saur accurate and cute lol). It's only the second build but there's already so much going on and I'm here for it! Can't wait for future build.

sidenote:Otto is so stupid but he's cute so I forgive him.

cara, eu sou tao apaixonado nessa trilha sonora, me pegou cheio. <3

What were the inspirations for Cienie?

is Marcus available ? I would love to date him he so cute !

1irst of all, thank xou sooo much for adding the pronunciations! Polish is 1ne of the languages I struggle the most to figure out, so it's extremely helpful! 😌

That scene at the Oginski's was flippin' hilarious! 😂 shame, poor fella. I just wanted to give him a big hug when he went "Nooooo~" 😋 I love how well written all the characters are, this scene alone was enough to showcase just how well constructed and alive they all feel, which in itself showcases xour skills as a writer 🙂

Real great update. I'm so invested in the story, it's compelling, dark, and not so consuming that it gives me anxiety 😁 I love the mix of crime-drama & horror/thriller, it blends so nicely together with the overall vibe xou've set

1ne final thing... With how this updated ended, does this mean the VN will have NSFW scenes? Sorry if this has already been asked. Either way, amazing work, I look forward to the next update! ☺️

Lovely VN. Playing since the first build and the latest update is great.

Sprites are great, art and CGs are stellar, UI is nice and has personality, music is something that caught my attention especially, love the vibes. The in game dictionary is also a GREAT feature!! Thank you deeply for adding it.

Can't wait to see more.

Also, Otto is my favorite character so far. How can you not love him…

OMG this makes me so happy, I'm really enjoying this VN, it's amazing and so captivating!

I downloaded this game, but it won't let me play

I really liked what you have so far, but I will speak plainly that with it being named 1.0 I had thought that this was a finished product rather than a first chapter, so when it ended so abruptly I was very surprised. But it has a nice hook, so I will keep this game in mind for the future.

The "No lah😑" was invoked let's GOOO

I read the comments and saw that no ones asked this, so i figured i would.

You mentioned LGBT+ and adult themse but only explained as far as the violence and such, but as there is possible romance, i must know.

NSFW?

Can we expect a full polish version of this awesome game in the future?

Sorry if this question was already answered :)

What specific species is Raymond? Is he a Sumatran Tiger?

czuje się tak polsko jak gram w tą gre 

Works just fine on the Mac.

I really look forward to your next release!

is tomasz a cat or a wolf/canine? It's very hard to tell not that it matters haha although I am curious

i haven't played yet but from what the good things people are saying about the game in the comments im damn sure going to find out >:)

This is very early review of the project but here is what i can say for now will update it when it's updated:

This VN is a breath of fresh air, the characters, the art, the music and specially the setting feels inspired and alive and is a welcomed change to the current FVN scenario, Tom as a MC is specially interesting because he is amazing POV character because it feels like he is a character but is relatable enough for the reader project into him.

The supporting cast is lovable even with small amount of interactions their sprites, demeanor and actions paint a very clear picture of how they act. The writing i also should note is amazing on not dragging on needles details, dialogue boxes with more then 3 lines are rare and welcomed to make the reading comfortable.

All in all i will say this project has future and i will be rooting and supporting for you guys in this work of art they are making.

Omg I wait this game so fuking long. Great job!

This story starts out very strong. All the technical aspects of the VN are top-tier: art, menus, music, formatting, editing. Marcus is a terrific character and his relationship with Tomasz has the strongest writing in the story. The opening is mysterious and exciting.

[spoiler]

After that, the story seems to lose direction. The relationship of Tomasz with his father doesn't feel real--they seem more like roommates. You'd never guess that Tomasz lost his mom if the story didn't spell it out. The scene with the fox woman at the store seems pointless, and Tomasz seems oddly nonchalant about the gangster-ish guys looking for a friend. I'd expect him to be scared and on the phone instantly to try to figure out who they were & what was going on.

There's a jarring genre-shift with the appearance of Dawid. We know Tomasz has mental problems and severe anxiety and several scary/overwhelming things have happened/are happening to him all at once. I'd expect him to be very suspicious or distant about Dawid's sudden reappearance, but instead he instantly turns into the protag of a (perfectly good) dating sim.

It feels like Tomasz is the focus of too many different narrative threads at once. The character gets no breathing room to develop because the story is constantly dragging him into yet a new plot. 

Hopefully with greater length and more editing, most of these issues will naturally resolve themselves.

The VN crashes when I go investigate the noise. 

I really want to know what happens! 😥

Edit: I'm on Android

Very impressed with the first build! Caught some Twin Peaks vibes from all that's happening. The characters all seem to have some depth to them already, with their little backstories and well-written interactions. The art is great, I'm especially ready to thoroughly investigate Raymond and Otto. Something that would be great to see in a feature build is a bit more backstory for Markus, with him being a detective in a detective story, moreover a close friend to main character. Looking forward to next parts of the story!